a letter
Su,
I have been confusing my writing. To make some challenging, I always write a number of
long and complicate sentences and use varying vocabulary, but I don’t think that make point
to me. I’m also tired of making a big sentence because it consume me a lot and I feel exhaust
to do other things. On my assignment, you wrote, you should keep sentences simple. Now I
know that I ‘m in a hurry to conquer English, and I still need practice more simple sentences
at first. I think it is the reason why my assignment point always just so- so. Next time I will pay
more attention on correct vocabulary, sentence structure and doing perfect simple sentences.
On Tuesday, we did a presentation. Initially, I ‘m a little nervous, even forget the word what
I should say; what a pity! During the process, I exerted to adjust my attitude to calm, and then
I involve into the address. The feeling is so cool! I looked your countenance is always strict, can
you give me some opinion about my presentation.
I have been confusing my writing. To make some challenging, I always write a number of
long and complicate sentences and use varying vocabulary, but I don’t think that make point
to me. I’m also tired of making a big sentence because it consume me a lot and I feel exhaust
to do other things. On my assignment, you wrote, you should keep sentences simple. Now I
know that I ‘m in a hurry to conquer English, and I still need practice more simple sentences
at first. I think it is the reason why my assignment point always just so- so. Next time I will pay
more attention on correct vocabulary, sentence structure and doing perfect simple sentences.
On Tuesday, we did a presentation. Initially, I ‘m a little nervous, even forget the word what
I should say; what a pity! During the process, I exerted to adjust my attitude to calm, and then
I involve into the address. The feeling is so cool! I looked your countenance is always strict, can
you give me some opinion about my presentation.
posted by binbin at 2:33 PM
1 Comments:
Hi Binbin,
I think you should try to keep your sentences simple until you can gradually increase their complexity. It is the best way to start.
The presentations were fairly good although there could have been some improvements. I will give you back your marks and comments this week.
See you tomorrow.
Sue
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